It was love at first sight. His rain soaked shivering body sought shelter under the tree outside her window. Their eyes met; their worlds merged into one. Gradually, she knew one day she’d have to tell him why she was always behind the grilled window. She realized that she could no longer hide the truth.
The day he insisted to see her in person she mustered up all her courage to face him; she could feel her world crumbling piece by piece. As she dragged her limp self on her wheelchair, she noticed his smile did not fade an inch.
That was a nice take on the prompt.. Great! 🙂
Thanks so much Sagar 🙂
This is wow! Last line made the whole write up deep, beautiful and full of romance! 🙂 Really nice 🙂
Thanks so much 🙂
Appears so real
Thanks , glad you found this real…its rare but real no doubt 🙂
So touching…Hope there are many people like him.. very nice
Hope so too…I guess we do find some men like that, but yes, its just too rare.
wow! May be this is what true love is,.acceptance without conditions!
Yeah….unconditional….very tough but its possible.
Well done – love the surprise at the end!
Thanks Laurel 🙂
heart warming! 🙂 🙂
Glad you found it heart warming 🙂
Touching the heart with just few words.
🙂 Am glad you made a connect there!
A real man with a pure heart….loved it!
It takes a real man to stand up like that…true! Thanks Shelly
Aww! That’s so heartwarming and lovely! Good to see you back here, Kajal 🙂 ♥
Thanks Shilpa…am glad am back too 😀
Beautiful take on the prompt, Kajal. It made my heart go aww 🙂
Thanks Sulekha 🙂 Glad you liked the li’l love story 🙂
Short but full of expression
Thanks so much 🙂
Sensitive story competently told in 100 words, Kajol. The characters well built and expressed thousand emotions like the rainbow hues.
Thanks so much Vishal 🙂
Loved this story Kajal…I love reading about such men, men who can actually fall in love!
Some men do Naba…and that gives us so much hope 🙂 Thanks!
Awesome take on the prompt! Now that truly is love at first sight.. ♥
Thanks Kathy, am glad you liked this story 🙂
Excellent take on the prompt!
Thanks Ashwin 🙂
That was heartwarming! Thumbs up!
Thanks 🙂
Now that is a true love story.
Sure is , Suzy 🙂 Thanks!
That gave me goosebumps!!! 😀
Hope the good kinds… 🙂
Lovely story with so much hope in it 🙂
🙂 That’s what is required the most… right 🙂
It does happen in true love stories. I have witnessed one such. Physical appearances or disabilities do not matter when the hearts are meant to be one. Beautiful! Felt really good reading it. 🙂
Thansk Rekha…I really felt great visualizing it 🙂
Lovely story Kajal. Reinforcing the belief in true love 🙂
Thanks Sid…and welcome back to my blog 🙂
That s such a moving narration .. loved it ❤