Did you never love me?He quizzed her.She stood staring straight ahead of her without a word.
He walked away. Her glance followed his steps. As soon as he turned around to give her a last look, she looked away. He wiped a sole tear from his cheek and went out of sight. She ran back into the room, sobbing like an inconsolable child.
How could I ever tell him that in a few months he would not have me to love him anymore? I would be gone, lost, forever. Best to have him leave now.
This post is a part of the Ultimate Blog Challenge, July 2013
Rainbow Hues 
Reminds me of an old movie with Bette Davis. She becomes blind while packing his suitcase in the end.
Oh wow, glad this made a connect with you. Sad about the description you gave for the movie. Wish I knew the name of the movie and I would have checked it. Thanks for visiting my blog!
I have heard many stories of just this. One is scared of the pain of telling the truth & instead pushes away. Very sad.
Dont do that!! You have no idea how much I adore these stories and how much they also affect me! But Kajal what a marvelously done build up and the end. Kudos woman!! Richa
Very emotional! I must go back and read more 🙂
It is truly sad ! But then these kinds of things do happen!
Thanks Richa…your appreciation means much considering you yourself are such a nice writer
Most welcome…I'd love that.Thanks for visiting 🙂
This reminded me of a movie – can't remember the name now – had Richard Gere and Wynona Ryder in it. So emotional!
That was Autumn In New York, I guess…does this scenario remind you of that…well, hope you liked it!
this was amazing…loved it…
the end just hit me like a thunderbolt… lovely!
THanks Rinky…and thanks for visiting my blog after a long long time 🙂 Keep visiting
Thanks Princess
Hah…I imagined Meena Kumari after reading this tyaag-balidaan post!
Nice one Kajal.
You are trying to make her die or marry someone else? Happens a lot.
aah ! such a short post but felt sad ! That pic is apt for the postBTW good luck for UBC ! Bravo 🙂
I somehow like tragic love stories…makes me believe in love which is beyond here and now.
Thanks Janu
This kinda thing sure happens a lot. I don't know if she's dying or marrying someone else…guess, she's just drifting away.
Thanks Afshan. I thought of using 100 words for this one.
Yes, yes – that's the movie! I liked it, of course. 🙂
I liked that one…I love-love stories.
Aah! That's sad and tragic!A beautifully written tale 🙂
Thanks Shilpa
In true love, lovers put their feelings at risk…wonderful work!