She heard the loud thumping, imbalanced sound of his footsteps. He stopped at the doorway and called out her name. From behind the closet, she could see his shadow move from room to room. He would strike any time, but she was ready today.
With immense vehemence she began walking behind him. He stopped, she stopped… midway. He looked around, she hid. As soon as he went about moving, still calling out her name, she leapt and dug the knife on his back. There he lay, in a pool of his blood. She was tired of being a victim anymore.
Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge – July 2014
This month, I hope to do a theme “Emotions“and that too in the form of drabble. Hopefully, I am able to do justice to my resolve of writing the whole of this month.
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Hi Kajal,good that she stabbed him and took revenge.Very well written .
Thanks Ushajee 🙂
Revenge is a dish best served cold! The building of suspense was very good, I was reading with bated breath! 🙂
Thanks Shilpa…hope it was justice enough 😛
such an extreme and well deserved reaction!
Thanks Pixie…yeah it will land her in trouble but she was already in hell, I guess
Whew! Glad she got to him before he could get to her.
Yeah…am glad too 🙂 Thanks Tulika
OOh! This was wicked. But probably he deserved it. Liked the build up!
Guess he did Shailaja….
Thanks 🙂
She was good!
Sure was 🙂
Wah! the pace was nice and the suspense was built well.. very nicely done
Thanks Bhavya 🙂
Sometimes, vengeance is needed in our quest for freedom. Crisply narrated and terrific build up, Kajal:)
Thanks so much Vishal 🙂 Yes, sometimes that’s the only way left!
Wow – so well written Kajal – could feel the tension – and glad she got to him first…!
Am glad she did too…guess it was too much playing a victim all the time, she had to take things in her own hands.
Thanks Eli!
wow, that was nice Kajal
Thanks Tina 🙂
Serves him right and kudos to her. It’s high time we take revenge on people who doesn’t even care about us a bit!
Yeah, I guess…but some circumstances vary!
desperate time needs desperate measures.
Truly!
Thanks so much!